My college film: Dude, Where's My Wall

Here is my film. It's pretty bad.

To improve we should of recorded dialogue without the disruption in the background. Overall shots were pretty good, although none of it felt very dynamic and felt very still. No fluidity. Although this does add to the "humour"... Lighting however was pretty good, everything was clear to see. Audio is a problem. I could not scale sound very well, many sound are too loud or too quiet and I cannot do much to change that with my limited knowledge. The flow between shots is...semi fluid. Most of the time the audiences view is naturally looking where it should, and their eyes don't have to do too much work to see what is happening.

Turns out I missed an audio clip. At the end there was meant to be a cartoon zoom effect. It seemed to of disappeared mysteriously just before I uploaded it to youtube...either way I've added it to the file, but I have not re-uploaded to youtube yet.

Here's the re-upload